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"Her [[patience]] shown in teaching others, brings with it her recognition for [[self]] as a contributor, and an [[ability]] to gain self love and [[self esteem]], and to be [[proud]] of the successes her toils will bring. Womanhood certainly doesn't need to represent "[[submission]]", or her being "lower than" her [[counterpart]], no.

"Her [[patience]] shown in teaching others, brings with it her recognition for [[self]] as a contributor, and an [[ability]] to gain self love and [[self esteem]], and to be [[proud]] of the successes her toils will bring. Womanhood certainly doesn't need to represent "[[submission]]", or her being "lower than" her [[counterpart]], no.

"Long ago your [[culture]] did go so wrong when the initiatives were taken to pursue this [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Patriarchy male-dominant] way of life. Recognize your potential for feminine [[strength]] you may show in insisting on [[peace]], tranquility, and caretaking - the [[gentle]], softer view of life. This is much needed at this time of serious [[consideration]] of employing [[warfare]] and [[death]] in [[Problem solving|solving strategic problems]].

"Long ago your [[culture]] did go so wrong when the initiatives were taken to pursue this [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Patriarchy male-dominant] way of life. Recognize your potential for feminine [[strength]] you may show in insisting on [[peace]], tranquility, and caretaking - the [[gentle]], softer view of life. This is much needed at this time of serious [[consideration]] of employing [[warfare]] and [[death]] in [[Problem solving|solving strategic problems]].

On a world run by [[women]] there would be much less reason for "[[conquering]]" and "the bringing under [[control]]" of my [[family]] unit. Honor your womanhood, my children, and others will learn to [[honor]] you and all [[females]] of this special planet. What we ask for, and how we [[explain]] our needs, does make a difference in our [[communicating]] to all that we are proud and thankful to be women.

On a world run by [[women]] there would be much less reason for "[[conquering]]" and "the bringing under [[control]]" of my [[family]] unit. Honor your womanhood, my children, and others will learn to [[honor]] you and all [[females]] of this special planet. What we ask for, and how we [[explain]] our needs, does make a difference in our [[communicating]] to all that we are proud and thankful to be women.