Talk:2010-05-02-Earth Changes

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I do think, however, that the closing should be one paragraph earlier. When Merium talks about the storm subsiding and the weather turning fair, the closing is underway already. - Gerdean


Thanks for the encouragement! I do agree. Actually, I thought about doing it this way at first but elected to go with the more literal approach. I am glad to know you would favor a more sensitive and personal method.--rdavis 04:42, 7 May 2010 (UTC)