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David-I tweaked a few things, mostly inserting links, but I wanted to know what you think/how you feel about the image being on the right? Once I structure the essay with paragraphs, the table of contents automatically appears on the left making it somewhat competing with the image. I like images on the left, but due to the structure of the software that (gratefully) creates TOC's, I usually put the images on the right. You can look at the previous revision that will show the image on the left after I had inserted paragraphs. Regardless, it is a pleasure to think together, and if by chance you find the open links (in red) attractive, dive in. Otherwise, I will get to them when I can.--rdavis 17:46, 7 April 2009 (EDT)
 
David-I tweaked a few things, mostly inserting links, but I wanted to know what you think/how you feel about the image being on the right? Once I structure the essay with paragraphs, the table of contents automatically appears on the left making it somewhat competing with the image. I like images on the left, but due to the structure of the software that (gratefully) creates TOC's, I usually put the images on the right. You can look at the previous revision that will show the image on the left after I had inserted paragraphs. Regardless, it is a pleasure to think together, and if by chance you find the open links (in red) attractive, dive in. Otherwise, I will get to them when I can.--rdavis 17:46, 7 April 2009 (EDT)
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Rob, the image works nicely on the right.  I really like the "paragraph" structure.  Although technically those aren't paragraphs--I would call them "self-outlining labeled sections."  Very nice...adds visual appeal and makes it much more readable! --[[User:Davidc|Davidc]] 19:31, 7 April 2009 (EDT)