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You're most welcome, and thank you again for your encouragement! It appears I had noticed this grammar error as I had made the change, but for the record, I am going to insert this email in the discussion page for future reference. Your attention to details is much appreciated!
On Jan 3, 2010, at 3:00 PM, mckeecalvin@aol.com wrote:
Thank you Rob.
I appreciate your work and countless hrs of time involved here.
I also appreciate your openness to have input and corrections. I'd suggest some grammer change in paragraph 5 of Mary's May 23, 2005 lesson.
as it is ...
night in his drunkenness I seen him beat my mother. I seen her cower.
It doesn't sound proper english... if you agree, I'd suggest something like:
Many a night in his drunkenness I saw him beat my mother, I saw her cower.
Or...
Many a night in his drunkenness I had seen him beat my mother, I had seen her cower.