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== review of topics ==
== review of topics ==
Michael- As we discussed, I will enter comments here that concern the topics themselves to include those that may need adding, amending, or deleting. Where comments are focused upon the topic 'article' i.e. the reference(s) the topic points to, I will make these on the corresponding article page.--Rdavis 20:08, 21 September 2008 (EDT)
Michael- As we discussed, I will enter comments here that concern the topics themselves to include those that may need adding, amending, or deleting. Where comments are focused upon the topic 'article' i.e. the reference(s) the topic points to, I will make these on the corresponding article page.--rdavis 20:08, 21 September 2008 (EDT)
Michael- I have run into some technical delays with the printer and my computer (I am writing from a library computer now) that will have cost us precious time. Given there is still need for discussion between us as well as members of the Editorial Committee you proposed July 21st, I suggest that we use the existing manuscript to make a proof. We could then circulate copies of it for further comment by readers, and when adjustments can be incorporated, release the accepted text for publication.--rdavis 13:02, 25 September 2008 (EDT)
Michael- I have run into some technical delays with the printer and my computer (I am writing from a library computer now) that will have cost us precious time. Given there is still need for discussion between us as well as members of the Editorial Committee you proposed July 21st, I suggest that we use the existing manuscript to make a proof. We could then circulate copies of it for further comment by readers, and when adjustments can be incorporated, release the accepted text for publication.--rdavis 13:02, 25 September 2008 (EDT)
Rob- That sounds fine. I'll clean it up a little and send it to you. Do you want me to eliminate any repetition and put in a reference instead before I send it to you?--[[User:Michaelm|Michaelm]] 20:41, 25 September 2008 (EDT)
Rob- So I'm cleaning it up a lot. I'm up to page 185 as I begin today. I've figured out how to solve the spacing problem and I'm doing that throughout the manuscript. I'm eliminating repetition and beginning to put in references. It will be ready to send around in a few days. I have a friend and tennis student of mine who is interested in the book and offered to proof read it. I sent him a copy of what I've cleaned up so far. It's looking good. I hope you've worked out your technical problems. Lets talk on the phone today. --[[User:Michaelm|Michaelm]] 10:27, 28 September 2008 (EDT)
Michael-Sorry I missed you when I called last night, but I forgot I was on a different time zone. Nevertheless, I will call tonight.--rdavis 14:44, 29 September 2008 (EDT)