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Gerdean:  While you are there, Athena, I could ask another question, then, and that is: should I add another segment after Part III, to recap or summarize or opine or promise or conclude or … anything at the end?

Gerdean:  While you are there, Athena, I could ask another question, then, and that is: should I add another segment after Part III, to recap or summarize or opine or promise or conclude or … anything at the end?

   

   

ATHENA:  I would suggest you do add some [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Appendices appendices] or a [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glossary glossary] or footnotes to add [[information]] or definitions as needed. There aren’t too many but you would do well to let your [[readers]] know, for example, what “[[Morontia Mota|mota]]” means or who “[[Nebadonia]]” is or what “[[Urantia]]” or [[http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayurvedic Ayurvedic] mean.  These are [[words]] that will help you with your [[audience]].  They would be able to get the gist of it without those details but it would behoove you to have those details for those who want to know those [[things]].  Be accommodating where possible.  All right?

ATHENA:  I would suggest you do add some [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Appendices appendices] or a [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glossary glossary] or footnotes to add [[information]] or definitions as needed. There aren’t too many but you would do well to let your [[readers]] know, for example, what “[[Morontia Mota|mota]]” means or who “[[Nebadonia]]” is or what “[[Urantia]]” or [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ayurvedic Ayurvedic] mean.  These are [[words]] that will help you with your [[audience]].  They would be able to get the gist of it without those details but it would behoove you to have those details for those who want to know those [[things]].  Be accommodating where possible.  All right?

   

   

Gerdean:  Yes.  There is also talk about cover art, whether it should be in [[color]] or in black and white.  Do you have any opinion on that?

Gerdean:  Yes.  There is also talk about cover art, whether it should be in [[color]] or in black and white.  Do you have any opinion on that?

   

   

MERIUM:  I would like to let Tomas come visit you now for he has asked to join with you in a celebration of your [[relationship]] … in [[fact]], his commencement of his teaching [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tenure tenure] here in this cosmic classroom.  I’ll be back.

MERIUM:  I would like to let Tomas come visit you now for he has asked to join with you in a celebration of your [[relationship]] … in [[fact]], his commencement of his teaching [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tenure tenure] here in this cosmic classroom.  I’ll be back.

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TOMAS:        Good afternoon, dear friends.  I am Tomas, your Teacher. I am pleased to be in your [[presence]] once again and to enjoy the [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ambiance ambiance] of your [[environment]].  As we know, your environment begins within you, in the [[soul]] self coming forth from that [http://nordan.daynal.org/wiki/index.php?title=Paper_112#112:3._THE_PHENOMENON_OF_DEATH citadel of the spirit] and entering the external environment by the [[ministry]] of [[mind]].  

TOMAS:        Good afternoon, dear friends.  I am Tomas, your Teacher. I am pleased to be in your [[presence]] once again and to enjoy the [http://www.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ambiance ambiance] of your [[environment]].  As we know, your environment begins within you, in the [[soul]] self coming forth from that [http://nordan.daynal.org/wiki/index.php?title=Paper_112#112:3._THE_PHENOMENON_OF_DEATH citadel of the spirit] and entering the external environment by the [[ministry]] of [[mind]].